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Caught in a blizzard of razors
Like venom dripping from the sky
The bitter perfume of  my demise
Tasting so sweet yet pungent
Thriving on life
Surrounded with sorrow
Covered in pain
Lifes a lie
Deaths a promise
An assurance of the end
The end of our world
Another dieing life
Leads to my dieing world
Our dieing world
In the end we are
Just another dieing world
©2005-2009 ~DrowninInAngelTears
:icondrownininangeltears:

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Poem i wrote of course. Den helped well he didn't tell me the words he helped me free my mind and beable to think of something. This is my first post if i did something wrong witht he whole submitting please tell oh and comment i don't care if you say it sux leave some advice though t/y
~Dar

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:icondecayingwings:
It's awesome dar! You should put the other one up as well.

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'When life gives you lemons, make lemonade, and then throw it in the face of the person who gave you the lemons until they give you the oranges you originally asked for'

What is the meaning of life-shawna
Sex, monkeys, and the ocasianol purple monkey-
:iconfjollemis:
very good poem yea, good flow story and everything. You did it all the right with the submitting.
:iconpaintertk:
Try it translate into Slovak language. I think, that good poem. :)

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:D(Sorry for my bad english. I've only started to learn...):D
:iconhushthedamned:
Its quite well written dearie.
The flow is very good
You should attempt to post more?
:heart:
:iconvenet:
Thanks to Dennis to give me this link. Great poet. I like it.

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HelloFlo social net work on [link]
:icondrownininangeltears:
Thanks all for your comments.

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